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Submitted: February 2
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com: tikiby *MeteorCrash

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Animals

^{edit// took some advice and erased the shoulder blades and added more detail into the scarf. also cleaned up the fur on her head. it was bothering me. ; ^ ; thanks for the critiques guys!!

painted not-so-headshot commission for =rainfreezer

c-can i just lay down here and cry for a moment

this came out so good idk what happened but it did and i'm so happy........
still need to work on the furrrr but wow one giant step forward.....

critiques are nice... ; ^ ;}

Critique by =TabbyTigerCat Feb 2, 2013, 9:58:40 AM

I suck at critiques, but hopefully I'll manage to pull one off for this beautiful masterpiece!
First of all, I really love how you did the fur. The texturing is really pretty and it shows the highlights and shadows perfectly. I particularly like the cheek fluff, and also the way you outlined everything in blue. I also absolutely love the eye, which I thought I'd just point out. It really looks like it's glowing ;U;
The only thing that confuses me is her chest. I don't know if those are boobs or what...? It's very minor, though, and I love the rest of it. That's all I have to say, I guess!

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Critique by =Magicpawed Feb 2, 2013, 9:18:11 AM

First of all, wow; just wow this is amazing!
My critiques work like this: I tell you what I like and what I think could be changed.

What I like:
The fur detail
The eyes,
the ears omg
The shading

What could be changed and how:
First thing I notices were those shoulder blades protruding
Shoulder blades face up not down; and for this pose they are not meant to be that visable. The shading underneath is really dark and it brings they eye straight there and not to the face, fir detail ect try studind pictures of cats sitting like that.

Second of all, the fur is so nicely dtailed but the scarf isn't- Try usuing highlight and folds more and find out what the blue tidbits are- are they feathers? Cotton? ect

overall, this is really nice omg